immortality

immortality
is never to be
as the consequence
of humanity is inevitable.
but today
is immortal because
you smiled                                                                                                                                                at me

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    1. Dear Mrs Miller,
      Thank you so much for commenting! I really do have a passion for writing and, since the holdiays, seem to have discovered a passion for poetry!
      Thanks again and I can’t wait to get back to school!
      Olivia

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  1. Hi Liv,
    Although the photo of me isn’t too flattering, I really like this poem! You use really nice wording and the theme behind it is really beautiful 🙂 Please keep writing, I’ll enjoy reading it!
    Jess

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