immortality
is never to be
as the consequence
of humanity is inevitable.
but today
is immortal because
you smiled at me
goldenchild31
You have been busy writing and recording your poetry 🙂 such beautiful words indeed. Keep writing on a whim Olivia, I love it.
Mrs Miller
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Dear Mrs Miller,
Thank you so much for commenting! I really do have a passion for writing and, since the holdiays, seem to have discovered a passion for poetry!
Thanks again and I can’t wait to get back to school!
Olivia
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Hi Liv,
Although the photo of me isn’t too flattering, I really like this poem! You use really nice wording and the theme behind it is really beautiful 🙂 Please keep writing, I’ll enjoy reading it!
Jess
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Dear Jessica,
Thank you for your flattering comment. I can say this because you are my sister (in case anyone is wondering). I love to write so keep posted!
Olivia
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